diff --git a/Book-1/Chapter-2.md b/Book-1/Chapter-2.md index 03698f4..f065084 100644 --- a/Book-1/Chapter-2.md +++ b/Book-1/Chapter-2.md @@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ The compass was pointing down the road, but there was something in the way. A hu Laz's voice was hushed. "Find some of those coins that you got in the boxes. Look for one with a picture of a sun on one side, and an X on the other." -As Slannon shuffled through the coins, making as little noise as possible, Mira peered around the corner again. "It's getting closer." +As Slannon shuffled through his pockets, making as little noise as possible, Mira peered around the corner again. "It's getting closer." "Found it, now what?" diff --git a/Book-1/Chapter-3.md b/Book-1/Chapter-3.md index f2f1b00..cf578d1 100644 --- a/Book-1/Chapter-3.md +++ b/Book-1/Chapter-3.md @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ Slannon stood stunned. He heard the words, but they didn't make much sense. "Wha Mira shot him an incredulous look. "That's not possible. For a city like this to exist, humans would have had to be on this planet for years. But more importantly, what do you mean magic is real?" -"There's something weird about this place. You've already seen it with those coins, as well as what I just showed you. Symbols and willpower, together, cause things to happen that we typically wouldn't think possible. We've only figured out a few of the things that are possible. That's where Rasp is now - looking for artifacts we can study. His theory is that somewhere, there's a translation guide for Unua. He's been looking in the stores near us. Meanwhile, we use this room to practice and experiment with the things that we do know." Laz made a sweeping gesture. "`pah pah pah`." Three more bolts of light shot from his hand, striking various targets. "I've gotten to be a good shot with this one." +"There's something weird about this place. You've already seen it with those coins, as well as what I just showed you. Symbols and willpower, together, cause things to happen that we typically wouldn't think possible. We've only figured out a few of the things that we can do. That's where Rasp is now - looking for artifacts we can study. His theory is that somewhere, there's a translation guide for Unua. He's been looking in the stores near us. Meanwhile, we use this room to practice and experiment with the things that we do know." Laz made a sweeping gesture. "`pah pah pah`." Three more bolts of light shot from his hand, striking various targets. "I've gotten to be a fairly good shot with this one." Slannon held out a hand. "Pah." Nothing happened.