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@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ The compass was pointing down the road, but there was something in the way. A hu
Laz's voice was hushed. "Find some of those coins that you got in the boxes. Look for one with a picture of a sun on one side, and an X on the other."
As Slannon shuffled through the coins, making as little noise as possible, Mira peered around the corner again. "It's getting closer."
As Slannon shuffled through his pockets, making as little noise as possible, Mira peered around the corner again. "It's getting closer."
"Found it, now what?"

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@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ Slannon stood stunned. He heard the words, but they didn't make much sense. "Wha
Mira shot him an incredulous look. "That's not possible. For a city like this to exist, humans would have had to be on this planet for years. But more importantly, what do you mean magic is real?"
"There's something weird about this place. You've already seen it with those coins, as well as what I just showed you. Symbols and willpower, together, cause things to happen that we typically wouldn't think possible. We've only figured out a few of the things that are possible. That's where Rasp is now - looking for artifacts we can study. His theory is that somewhere, there's a translation guide for Unua. He's been looking in the stores near us. Meanwhile, we use this room to practice and experiment with the things that we do know." Laz made a sweeping gesture. "`pah pah pah`." Three more bolts of light shot from his hand, striking various targets. "I've gotten to be a good shot with this one."
"There's something weird about this place. You've already seen it with those coins, as well as what I just showed you. Symbols and willpower, together, cause things to happen that we typically wouldn't think possible. We've only figured out a few of the things that we can do. That's where Rasp is now - looking for artifacts we can study. His theory is that somewhere, there's a translation guide for Unua. He's been looking in the stores near us. Meanwhile, we use this room to practice and experiment with the things that we do know." Laz made a sweeping gesture. "`pah pah pah`." Three more bolts of light shot from his hand, striking various targets. "I've gotten to be a fairly good shot with this one."
Slannon held out a hand. "Pah." Nothing happened.